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高考的号角早已吹响。对那些书面表达方面还有欠缺的学生来说,在考前学习各地高考书面表达范文,意义非凡。除了可以了解高考书面表达类型、体裁,小编还从话题词汇、高级写作词汇、句型等方面加以点拨。写作是一个积累的过程,虽说不积跬步无以至千里,但临阵磨枪不快也光。小编建议同学们,反复阅读或者熟诵2016年这九篇高考范文。为了一份漂亮的高考试卷分数能敲开更好的命运大门也好,为了终身学习也罢,只要努力了,日后必不后悔。终有一天,你会感谢自己当年的那份努力。


(范文加粗词为写作高级用词或地道用词)

一、2016年全国卷I


 假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历 (resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式 (format)。

注意:

     1. 词数100左右;

     2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

One possible version:

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I’m writing to ask for your help. I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.

Thank you for your kindness!

Yours,

Li Hua

【点拨】

I. 必须掌握的相关话题词汇

1. apply for 申请

2. a part-time job 一份兼职工作

3. a foreign company 外资企业

4. an application letter 申请书

II. 高级词汇

1. grateful 感激的,与较基础的thankful相对。

2. attachment 附件,该词较生僻,学生输出可能会有困难。

PS:

I’m writing to ask for your help.中的ask for your help可以用seek your help代替,seek是正式用语。

III. 行文连接词

1. … the summer vacation, and I have just …

2. However, I am not quite sure …

3. … very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful 

IV. 句型

1. be sure of

2. I would be grateful if you could / would …

【拓展】工作与职业相关话题词汇

选自《高考总复习全效新方略


二、2016年全国卷II


       假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部 (photography club) 将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括:

       1. 主题:环境保护;

       2. 展览时间;

       3. 投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool.com

注意:

       1. 词数100左右;

       2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

One possible version:

Dear Peter,

Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【点拨】

I. 该书面表达话题涉及环保,是高考热门话题之一,需要掌握的最基础的话题词语莫过于environmental protection,即环保。更多环境话题词汇详见2016年北京卷点拨部分。

II. 该范文行文符合邀请函的特点,交代事项清晰,没有一味地使用陈述句,穿插使用祈使句,且全文句式多样化,少简短句,多复合句,使用了定语从句 (Any student who is interested …)、并列句 (I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted …)、宾语从句 (I remember you showed …)、时间状语从句 (… the last time you visited our school)、条件状语从句 (If you want to join, you can …) 等。其中,the last time引导时间状语从句用得较为巧妙。

III. 高级写作词

participate参加,是正式用语,适合用在较正式的文体中,比take part in 更适合用在该文中。


三、2016年全国卷III


假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:

1. 表示歉意;

2. 说明原因;

3. 另约时间。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

One possible version:

Dear Bob,

I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

Yours,

Li Hua

【点拨】

I. 该文是一封道歉信,在功能意念方面,属于社会交往篇。该范文要点全面,行文连贯,长短句相结合,用词及句型充满了歉意。范文使用了宾语从句 (I’m sorry to say that I cannot go … / I have just found that I have … / I hope the change …)、目的状语从句 (We can set out early so that we’ll have …)、条件状语从句 (If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet …) 以及省略句 (If not …)

II. 高级写作词

1. attend 参加

2. select 选择,对应常用基础词choose。

3. available 有空的,对应常用基础词free。


四、2016年北京卷


第一节

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:

1. 该人物是谁;

2. 该人物的主要贡献;

3. 该人物对你的影响。 

注意:1. 词数不少于50;

2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。  

Dear Jim,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

第二节  

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,介绍活动的全过程。

注意:词数不少于60。

提示词:地球日Earth Day

第一节

One possible version:

Dear Jim,

It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.

As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college, to be a bridge between China and the world.

Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.

Cheers!

Yours,

Li Hua

【点拨】

I. 体裁:应用文

II. 该话题考查学生的历史背景知识,兼顾中国传统文化,因为涉及到历史,会用到一些难度相对较大的词,整体算是一个有难度的书面表达。范文用到了同位语 (… Wei Yuan, a great thinker in …)

III. 写作高级词、地道用词

1. figure 人物,而不是用常用基础词person。

2. open sb’s eyes to sth 使人长见识或开眼界,该短语中的单词都不难,难的是掌握短语整体的含义,这也提示我们掌握词块的重要性。

3. inspire 激励,而不是用相对简单的encourage。

4. bridge在此意为“纽带”。

第二节  

One possible version:

A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.

    Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles, and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.

We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.

【点拨】

I. 该篇是情景式作文,跟环保相关,是高考较热门的话题之一,学生平常可有意识地积累相关话题词汇及句型等。范文用到了动词-ing形式作状语 (… calling upon us to join in …)、so … that结构及宾语从句 (… believe we can do more …)

II. 用词特征

1. 该篇用了大量的短语动词 (put up, call upon, join in, come up with, make use of, turn into, give away),还有合成词 (worn-out, cardboard, handbag) 及派生词 (unexpected)。

2. 文中用elderly people,语气较为尊重,而不是用old people。

【拓展】环境相关话题词汇

选自《高考总复习全效新方略


五、2016年天津卷


假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。

(1) 回顾双方的交流活动 (如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);

(2) 谈谈收获或感想;

(3) 表达祝愿与期望。

注意:

(1) 词数不少于100;

(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;

(3) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear friends,

How time flies!                                                             

                                                                              

Thank you.

One possible version:

Dear friends, 

How time flies! It’s getting close to the end of the communication activities which proved to be great and enjoyable. It has been two weeks since you came to our school for the exchange program, which has benefited all of us.

During the past two weeks, we have studied in the same classroom and lived in the same dormitory, which has enabled us to know each other better. Doing the same sports on the playground give us the opportunity to promote our friendship. What impress us most is your art skills, in which you showed outstanding talent. We believe that the students in our school have learned a lot from the exchange program.  

At last, on behalf of all the students in our school, I wish you have a safe and happy journey home and that there will be more programs like this in the future.

Thank you.

【点拨】

I. 话题:交换生,书面表达常考话题之一。

II. 高级写作词

1. benefit 受益,在此处是动词。

2. promote 促进,而不是用常用基础词develop。

3. outstanding 出色的

4. on behalf of 代表

III. 行文

该范文句式结构较复杂,长句子较多,一个句子中有多个从句,例如“It has been two weeks since you came to our school for the exchange program, which has benefited all of us.”其中,既有since引导的时间状语从句,又有which引导的非限制性定语从句。在“What impress us most is your art skills, in which you showed outstanding talent.”中,既用了what引导的主语从句,又用了in which引导的非限制性定语从句。最后一句话则用了两个宾语从句,第二个that不能省略。


六、2016年上海卷


Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

    假设你是中华中学学生姚平,最近参与了一项研究性学习调研,课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母,结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异 (数据如图所示)。根据图表写一份报告,在报告中,你必须:

1. 描述调研数据;

2. 分析可能导致这一结果的原因。

One possible version:

A survey conducted recently indicates that the parents who are proud of their children are twenty percent more than the children who consider themselves as the pride of their parents.

There exist two reasons, which may account for this subtle difference. First, conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their kids. This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self-confidence. Second, the current educational system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance, thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud. This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports, which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves.

Without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam-oriented educational methods, a kid would never end up with a positive grown-up.

【点拨】上海卷的书面表达范文行文流畅,但一如往常的难,句式结构超级复杂,到处是高级词,课标外词也不少,小编只从中挑出中等难度的高级词,至于其他更高级的词,小编只能说,超级有余力的同学自己好好琢磨吧!

I. 高级写作词

1. indicate 表明,对应基础词show。

2. account for 解释,对应基础词explain。

3. be accustomed to (doing) sth 习惯于 (做) 某事,对应基础词be used to (doing) sth。

4. excessively 广泛地,对应常用基础词widely。

5. significance 重要性,对应常用基础词importance。

II. 复杂句式

在“Second, the current educational system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance, thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud. ”中,forcing children to … 是动词-ing形式作结果状语,在该动词-ing短语中,believe后是that 引导的宾语从句,而在宾语从句中,又有因only前置引起的倒装句only by achieving … can they make …


七、2016年江苏卷


请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

In recent years, Internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby”.

Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer” competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers’ daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.

Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “Future Singer” competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要;

2. 用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法,并用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3. 不必写标题。

Possible version one:

On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.

In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.

To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on-line voting.

(150 words)

【点拨】

I. 高级写作词

1. beneficial 有益处的,而不是用good。

2. dilemma 困境,对应difficult situation。

3. participate 参加,而不是用take part in。

4. seek 寻求,而不是用ask for。

5. annoyed 恼怒的,对应常用词angry。

II. 行文连接词

1. … some people, while it puts others …

2. in addition  

3. furthermore

4. therefore

Possible version two:

Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it.

In my opinion, Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don’t want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.

In short, Internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.

(150 words)

【点拨】江苏卷范文用词跟上海卷相比是容易很多,但是对于大部分高中生而言,其中的用词还是较难,看着这样的范文,小编只能说,加油吧!同学们!高级无止境。

I. 写作高级词

observe 遵守,对应常用词obey,可从熟词生义角度来掌握该层释义。

II. 行文连接词

1. … side of the voting, although some are …

2. Firstly … Secondly …Thirdly 用于列举

3. therefore


八、2016年浙江卷


第二节:书面表达(满分30分)

  “Planning is good, but doing is better”是一句英语名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100~120词的短文。

  要求如下:

  1. 简述你对这句名言的理解;

  2. 用一个具体事例加以说明;

  3. 给出恰当的结尾。

  注意:1. 文章的标题已给出(不计词数);

        2. 文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息,否则按作弊行为认定。

Planning Is Good, But Doing Is Better

 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

One possible student version:

Planning Is Good, But Doing Is Better

  Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.

  My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.

I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.

【点拨】

I. 高级写作词、地道词

in detail 详细地

bear fruit 成功;取得成果

a case in point 恰当的例证

delivery 演讲方式

come out of 结果;结局

II. 行文连接词

1. however

2. after that


九、2016年10月浙江卷


    假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生 (exchange student) 去加拿大一所高中学习,住在Lynn家里。请给Lynn写一封邮件,内容包括:

    1. 介绍自己;

    2. 告知到达时间;

    3. 询问应做何准备。

注意:

    1. 词数80左右;

   2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

One Possible Version:

Dear Lynn,

    I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I’m happy to know that I’ll be staying with your family in the next few months while I’m studying at the local high school. Thank you for having me! I will arrive in Toronto on August 20th and get to your place late that afternoon. I wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in Canada.

    Looking forward to seeing you!

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【点拨】浙江新高考改革,第一节80词左右的书面表达,范文相对容易,注意其话题,又是交换生。范文行文紧凑,长短句结合。


综述

综上九篇书面表达,六篇是书信格式,涵盖环保、交换生等热点话题,各地范文语言水平有差异,上海最难,江苏在其次,其他卷别则难度中等,学生可以根据自己实际水平在考前熟读背诵。



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